CONTENTS
I. USEFUL EXPRESSIONS 常用语
II. SAMPLE 范文
III. TIPS 掌握写作要领
IV. EXERCISE: WORDS, PHRASES AND SENTENCE PATTERNS 精通常用词组和句型
V. WRITING WORKSHOP 写作小作坊
VI. GOODIES & GIFTS 实用小礼物
I. USEFUL EXPRESSIONS
常用语
1. How to start your letter?
Thank you for giving us the opportunity to quote on our new SB-500 digital communicators.
In response to your recent inquiry, we are pleased to submit the attached quotation for our xerox machines.
Thank you for requesting a quote on Campton's SB-500 digital communicators.
Now that we have completed the inspection of your building, we can confirm the price of the service you requested.
Enclosed are our latest catalog and price-list giving details of c.i.f. Hong Kong prices, discounts, and delivery dates.
2. How to emphasize the strength of your company?
Campton has been making digital communication products for over 10 years.
We are known for our high-quality products, reasonable prices, and reliable services.
Our list of satisfied customers in your country includes ... (companies).
3. How to talk about prices and payment terms?
We can quote you a gross price, including delivery charges.
We can offer you a price of $_____ per item, firm 30 days, after which the price will be subject to change.
We can quote you a price of $_____, though we can only hold this price for six weeks because of exchange fluctuations.
All list prices are quoted f.o.b. London and are subject to a 5% trade discount with payment by letter of credit.
We usually offer an 5% trade discount on f.o.b. prices, and would prefer payment by irrevocable letter of credit.
Normally we allow a 5% trade discount off net prices with payment on a documents against payment basis.
4. How to suggest further contact?
I would like to meet with you and get more information on your requirements,
May I see you sometime next week? I will call on ______ [date] to see if we can make an appointment.
I will call you Monday (Jan 20) to discuss these details.
I will call at the end of next week to see if you have any questions.
Please let us know if this arrangement is satisfactory.
5. How to end your letter?
I look forward to meeting you and having the opportunity of doing business with you.
Please contact us if we can be of any further help to you.
If there is any further information you require, please contact us.
If you need additional information, please feel free to call me at 000-0000.
Meanwhile, we look forward to hearing from you.
II. SAMPLE
范文
A QUOTATION COVER LETTER
Dear _______:
Thank you for your interest in OMT Systems. We are pleased to submit the attached quotation for our CB series of infrared beam detectors, as outlined in the attached specifications. We can ship these items within two weeks after we receive your order.
We sincerely appreciate your inquiry. If you need additional information, please feel free to call me at (000) 000-0000.
Sincerely yours,
___________[name]
___________[title]
Enclosure
III. TIPS
掌握写作要领
1. Thank the reader for his/her interest in your products.
2. Tell the reader what you have enclosed--quotation, specifications, etc.
3. Highlight any information you want the customer to notice--for example, your delivery schedule, payment terms, etc.
4. Offer to provide additional information if the reader requires it.
IV. EXERCISE: WORDS, PHRASES AND SENTENCE PATTERNS
精通常用词组和句型
V. WRITING WORKSHOP
写作小作坊
写作小作坊 叁考答案
Dear Mr. Peters:
I would like to request the opportunity to quote for this year's mobile communication products. MercuryTelecom has been making products for mobile communications for over fifteen years. We are known for our innovative, reliable, high-quality products and reasonable prices. Our list of satisfied customers in your country includes National Health Insurance, GeneralTaxi, and Public Transport. Enclosed is a brochure about our new Star100 mobile digital communication series.
I would very much like to meet with you to get more information on your communication requirements so that we may submit a quote. May I see you next Wensday morning? I will call on Monday to check if this is convenient for you.
I look forward to meeting you and having the opportunity of doing business with you.
Sincerely,
Mary Lee
Sales Manager
Enclosures
VI. SOMETHING FOR NOTHING
GOODIES & GIFTS (实惠小礼物)
1. New Words, New Meanings
EDUTAINMENT: n. education + entertainment
寓教於乐的产品
Example:
Two 21-inch interactive dolls--Arthur and D.W.--joined Microsoft's growing ActiMates family and brought more "edutainment" to the neighborhood.
2. A Ready-made Letter for You
Requesting clarification before offering a quotation or proposal
Dear _________:
Thank you for requesting a quote on the renovation of your restaurant. We are most interested in submitting a proposal for your consideration.
Before submitting our proposal, we have a few questions that we would like you to clarify:
1.........................................................................?
2.........................................................................?
3.........................................................................?
I will call you next Monday to discuss these details if I have not heard from you before then.
Sincerely,
_________[name]
_________[title]
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